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Post by Hazumirein on Jun 22, 2008 21:02:11 GMT -5
So, what do all you people think of DC so far? What do you like about it? What bothers you? Tell meeeeeee~~~~ So I can make it better =3
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tyto
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Post by tyto on Jul 5, 2008 16:39:45 GMT -5
The only thing that bothers me is having to wait for new pages. xD
I like... um... everything? xD The art makes me jealous.
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Post by Hazumirein on Jul 7, 2008 16:02:53 GMT -5
XD Unfortunately I can only work so fast, or I'd have new pages up more often. Even though I'm really just a slacker and should be working on a page right now...XP
(Oh, by the way Tyto, I am working on your contest prize, I swear >< *slow*)
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Post by blackcatz on Aug 24, 2008 23:15:05 GMT -5
I have absolutely no complaints about your comic ~ I love it! ;D
I agree with Tyto; the only complaint I have is having to wait for pages; but I know you're doing your very best~ so no complaints here once again XD
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Post by Hazumirein on Sept 2, 2008 17:52:55 GMT -5
@catz: Sometimes you're almost too nice, has anyone ever told you that? XD But thank you~~ XP And I really need to do start working to get pages done on time again. Grr. *slacker*
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Post by blackcatz on Sept 14, 2008 13:58:15 GMT -5
Is it a crime to be too nice? LOL ~ blame it on my upbringing ~ my 'rents basically drilled it into me as a mantra ~ if you can't say anything nice; say nothing at all... so you benefit
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Post by Aub on May 12, 2009 2:38:12 GMT -5
I agree with everyone else. *Offers everyone candy and sugery goodness*
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erro
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Post by erro on Dec 17, 2009 21:00:44 GMT -5
I for one disagree. Most webcomic authors don't even bother to update twice a week, in fact, it is most commonly once a week. I think the only quarrel I have is that the story is seven chapters in and you haven't established an antagonist, nor have you indicated why Riza is there, so far she is just an adventurer. It's still good, but it is often good to see where the comic is going at times. Now I'm not saying be predictable, I just don't want some random bad dude come up out of nowhere with no setup or forshadowing to his arrival. That's not always the best thing for a story. It's all good though, the characters are good, well established and the story so far is very original. I just hope that the library chapter will shed some direction for where the story is going. Though, if I thought that it was bad I wouldn't be here, so in other words; great job!
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Post by Hazumirein on Dec 19, 2009 16:23:23 GMT -5
erro: Ah, I was waiting for someone to point out the slow/nonexistant plot progression XD. It's coming, I swear. Though, when I read this post I did go through my script and figure out just what came in where. I admit, I'm definitely taking my time bringing out an antagonist, but it won't be out of nowhere when I do. There's actually already been some foreshadowing of what's to come, if you look *coughLunoschapterscough* :]. As for why Riza's there, figuring that out ties directly in with the antagonist, so it's another thing that'll come bit by bit. ^^; I'm sorry things seem to take forever in this story, but I have a lot of material to cover and characters to introduce, so it's taking awhile for the plot to develop. All I can tell you for now is to be patient, it's coming :3
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Post by lordseth on Dec 19, 2009 21:11:03 GMT -5
Yeah, seven chapters, of course that is book one for introduction to the story and if the library is near the start of volume two then it would work well in book form. Of course here we are reading it as a webcomic and things seem a little slow, however I don't mind that. If I could go into a fantasy world from my dreams I would like to explore a bit, though I think I would take the old man's advice and go to Relecross a little sooner than a month later; but since I think Riza was based off of you that explains so much. :3
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Post by Olive on Aug 9, 2010 12:57:02 GMT -5
I just started reading and I really like what I see; you have a very impressive art style! owo <3 Do you have a deviantART account? I'd seriously like to stalk watch you! <333
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erro
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Post by erro on Aug 9, 2010 13:36:33 GMT -5
Her DA is linked through the Author section of this website.
Welcome by the way!
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